Feedback(:

After showing my music video I ask for feedback from peers :)

Sarah:
Camillas music video:
Beginning  in amazing candidate number etc!
Love the sound
Clear story line: shots
Goes with the music
Still shots work really well giving the audience a chance to realise what's happening
I killed her... I'm an animal (Works)
Made me want to watch it & know more!!
Editings really quick
Cut bit of Ellie looking into the camera Xx

Feedback from Shehryar and David:
 Like the first shot with candidate number
good use of colour
quick transitions, good switch between black & white and colour
frame rate issue?
range of shots
lyrics reflect whats happening in the video, to some extent
good final shot
mise en scene is appropriate for narrative
nice mise en scene varied locations

Elise:
Hey cammmy, loved the video.
Got a great variety of shots Cammy! if there are any shots which can be edited to be less jittery that would make the cherry on top. i love the editing and the changes in speed. Its also a story which i understand and i am grasped to. xxxx

Josh:
Hey Camilla,
 Really like the production overall - really like the plot, was easy to understand about someone cheating.
 I like the idea of breaking down movement shots into photos that signify something like happiness, like you on the swing. The way your shots are varied, you show a hell of a lot of setting, in a zoo, kitchen, bedroom, trampoline... when you compare to other existing videos they do that as well. The camera shots in general I would say are fairly decent - they're quite jumpy at the start which I'd say is a key point of the video for someone to get an initial feel for it, if you relate to the evaluation Q's you could mention this.Also I like the idea of the volume at the start going up & down however the quality of it doesn't go with your video at all - maybe you could find a better way of getting that effect, as it does work but the quality is rather shoddy.
Hope this is ok, if you need anymore I'd be more than willing to help out!